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"Chimera Man" Posted: 2010-03-18 03:24 (Last Edited: 2010-03-20 04:56)

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Triflake

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#4846

Made another Mega Man style song, for a fangame. I'm pretty sure this one needs some better transitioning, and stuff at frame 06 seems pretty unsatisfactory (kind of wanted an MM3 thing going on, don't know how you guys'll see it), as of now I'd like some criticism as to what I can improve on that I'm not getting, maybe make it a little more Mega Man (since I know I strayed a fair amount from the regular formula on a couple occasions).

It isn't finished by any means, but I just wanted immediate feedback. Hope nobody minds. :>

Thanks. Smile

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Posted: 2010-03-18 23:23

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#4856

Hey, cool song.
I especially like your bass and drums.

I didn't see a problem with frame 6. I think frames 9-11 still need a little work.

Posted: 2010-03-19 02:54

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Arrow

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#4858

I like this a lot! You've definitely got the vibe down, and I think it transitions just fine. A work in progress it might be, but it feels very full and meaty.

Posted: 2010-03-20 06:06 (Last Edited: 2010-03-20 06:07)

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Rushjet1
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#4885

sounds good, agree with tadpole a bit, the end part on frame 9 sounds a bit off, i'd change this to a b-flat major chord to resolve on the next frame.

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