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remedmatika Posted: 2010-03-10 10:47  (Last Edited: 2010-03-17 07:56) Reply | Quote
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#4701
it's my ftm song about my strange feeling , i need more constructive critism .




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Posted: 2010-03-10 22:08 Reply | Quote
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For the future, rmk, you can simply upload your file to your post without using a file-sharing website. Amongst the jungle of checkboxes is one that says Attachment, or Attach File. Use that. Much easier.

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Posted: 2010-03-11 07:58 Reply | Quote
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#4716
ok thanks, sorry i am just noob .hehe

Posted: 2010-03-18 04:55  (Last Edited: 2010-03-19 03:23) Reply | Quote
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#4848
That song's actually pretty good. It sounds like a boss combat song for a sci-fi side-scroller.

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Posted: 2010-03-18 23:15 Reply | Quote
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I'll offer some pieces of constructive criticism.

I think your pulse channels could use spicing up. You could try some fancier volume control, like perhaps a decay at the end of notes. Or more notes, or portamento, or self-echo.

Your other channels could use some variation. I.E. drum fills, etc.


Posted: 2010-03-19 09:49 Reply | Quote
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#4867
wow great ! i will try !
thanks friends !

Posted: 2010-03-19 10:30 Reply | Quote
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#4868
ok thanks
i have a new song, i use the drum sample .
how about this ?sorry for my bad english .


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Posted: 2010-03-20 02:57 Reply | Quote
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That's quite impressive. I like your echo effects & the drums. I, however, still see a problem with the crash sample you have.

I think you need to increase the volume of the Crash03 sample you use (that means you need to re-import the crash sound, but increase the volume of the sample).

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Posted: 2010-03-21 05:25 Reply | Quote
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[quote=TechEmporium]That's quite impressive. I like your echo effects & the drums. I, however, still see a problem with the crash sample you have.

I think you need to increase the volume of the Crash03 sample you use (that means you need to re-import the crash sound, but increase the volume of the sample).[/quote]

wow thanks, but how to re-import the crash sound ?

Posted: 2010-03-22 01:16 Reply | Quote
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If you still have the original WAV file, you can open the crash cymbal's instrument, click on the DPCM tab, click the Import button & find your WAV file.

Then, in the next window, just increase the volume of the sample using the volume slider (set it to 15).

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Posted: 2010-03-22 10:13 Reply | Quote
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waw thanks ! i'll try it .

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