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FamiTracker
Hello there, fine Tracker. As you can tell by the title, I recently finished a cover of the critically acclaimed Hydrogen, from Hotline Miami. (With a little help from that guy in the pool below.) I really hope you enjoy listening to it. Feel free to take this song apart if you are learning how to track, or just want to add onto it.
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Sometimes the heaviest thing in life isn't our problems, but our feels.
I think there are three things that need to be said:
- Your tempo is too fast. Compare the rate your kicks play at to the original song.
- Your hi-hat and pulse rhythms are different from the original. Consider using Gxx to delay notes a couple of frames if you need to get "theoretical in-between rows" if the tempo you work at doesn't cut it. Also, study up on "triplets" and "shufflebeat." I think it will benefit you to know.
- I am glad you want to improve, and I think you will become a great composer if you continue to learn and develop your skills through applying techniques and self-experimentation
I've attached an FTM with the proper bass and tempo (with the pulse removed and drums, while shrunk to fit the new tempo, are unmodified)
I also want you to remember the shufflebeat/triplet example I linked in your Snowy Day thread, because I think it applies to this song's rhythm too: [url=http://famitracker.com/forum/attachments/68193/triplet_example.ftm]http://famitracker.com/forum/attachments/68193/triplet_example.ftm
