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Actually, what you should be doing is lower the volume of all the other channels so that your Triangle and DPCM volumes stick out more. For plain 2A03, I recommend both pulses and noise channels to use output volume levels around 9 and A (By which I mean the green blocks under the channel name, which is the volume column and instrument volume combined)
As for the song itself, pulse 2 and noise are very loud, using the max volume of F. The song also gets stale fast, with a lot of repetition without much variety. Consider changing up some of the endings on those patterns, and perhaps try practicing melody and bass flow to sharpen up your song structure: A strong melody and strong bass can very effectively help with a composition: [url=https://youtu.be/5epDVqpwtjw]https://youtu.be/5epDVqpwtjw
Once you can do that, everything else should hopefully come naturally. Hope this helps!
Finally taking steps forward I see!
This isn't bad. Even though channel utilization and volume control might not be optimal (nobody was certainly good at that in the beginning), you've still made a track that sounds very nice.
But what's going on with the base in the edit you uploaded? It doesn't sound quite right... So I just quickly fixed it for you.
I made some more songs. Now it's an album.
I need comments, criticism, concerns, and questions on the new songs I made.
(Yes, Ready Player! and Adventurous Spirit are awful, I know.)
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I agree with MiniMacro. Those other tracks are just hanging out on the module, minding their own business. They're not singled out for display purposes.
MM, you're making some real progress. I suggest that you try composing in another key, though. Sometimes if I hang out in one key for too long, all my stuff starts to sound the same.