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footprints420's Submissions Posted: 2015-03-21 06:24  (Last Edited: 2015-03-26 08:34) Reply | Quote
footprints420

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This is going to be my thread for posting songs and asking for help now. Enjoy!

[color=aqua][b][u]hear_its_roar_rough_sketch.ftm - posted Mar 21, 2015[/u][/b]
This is the reason why I made this thread today (3/21/15), I've hit a brick wall and would like some criticisms and suggestions before I go further with it. Largely unfinished.


[color=aqua][b][u]fight_or_flight!_min.ftm - posted Mar 07, 2015[/u][/b]
I think I learned a lot with this one. It could always be improved, though, so I'm open to suggestions.

[color=aqua][b][u]vrc6_song.ftm - posted Feb 02, 2015[/u][/b]
This is a track I made before I knew anything about volume control or channel clashing, so beware. I'm still working (procrastinating) on fixing it. Also the percussion is pretty terrible.

[color=aqua][b][u]vrc7_song.ftm - posted Feb 02, 2015[/u][/b]
This is my 1st revision of the track, there are some spots I want to come back to later, mainly, again, volume and drums.

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Posted: 2015-03-24 00:45 Reply | Quote
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dank weed bro

VRC7 Song: Sounds like a lost Starfox track almost... The mellow tone give it a lost level sort of feel.

Fight or Flight: The S02 effects in the DPCM are unpleasant; I would recommend using note releases over note cuts, but upstream FT offers no release analogue to note release. And what's with the F05-F03? F04-F04 is more logical.

This track reminds me of Tim Follin a lot, especially Time Trax's title music.

I really don't know what to say about Hear it's Roar Rough Sketch... It sounds largely unfinished but that's because it is. My only criticism is that the transition frames 08-0A is jarring - perhaps make it smoother?

Posted: 2015-03-26 08:31  (Last Edited: 2015-03-26 08:32) Reply | Quote
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I didnt put the S02's to actually stop the note, I was just trying to prevent the triangle channel volume from decreasing. I agree that the pops are off-putting though, I tried to hide them in the kicks of the triangle and noise channel. Is there a better way to achieve this?

As for the Fxx's, I was following [url=http://famitracker.com/wiki/index.php?title=Common_tempo_values]this. Did I misinterpret it?

And yeah, I almost didn't want to post Hear its Roar, but I just wanted some feedback because I was stuck. I think I meant for the notes in 08-0A to last double than what they do, do you think that's what makes it jarring, or is it related to the harmony more?

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