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Need input on Original Piece Posted: 2015-03-05 01:45 Reply | Quote
PlaceboWizard

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#66546
I'm making a small game for gamejolt.com and am making a soundtrack; how could I improve the first world theme?

Thanks :D

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??? Posted: 2015-03-05 08:10  (Last Edited: 2015-03-05 08:10) Reply | Quote
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I was making the game soundtrack for you, and we agreed on 2a03?

Is what you've posted for another game?

Either way, it's nice! Pulse 2 on should be a bit quieter, especially for the intro.
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[quote=MrKyurem]I was making the game soundtrack for you, and we agreed on 2a03?

Is what you've posted for another game?

Either way, it's nice! Pulse 2 on should be a bit quieter, especially for the intro.[/quote]
>another game

yep, its for the first thing im making to get used to unity 2d before working on the big project. (and testing the game engine with it)
Posted: 2015-03-06 01:58 Reply | Quote
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I fixed the volume a bit.

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Posted: 2015-03-06 02:22 Reply | Quote
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You really ought to detune the echos. It bugs me whenever anyone doesn't do that T_T
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If you really want to improve it, I would definitely look into expanding it. Right now it's really just one chord progression being repeated. I personally recommend a minimum of two different lengthy chord progressions for anything that is going to be repeating in the background for any extended amount of time. It's way more interesting and it's way less annoying for the player.

Other than that, this feels like a relatively solid section. If it were me I would probably tone down all accompaniment/chord support, create a more interesting bass-line, and make the melody not be the same for both section repeats. Other than that, pretty good. And if poodlecock's accurate about your echo in his comment above me, I'd look into that as well.
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