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[2A03] First Complete Original Posted: 2015-03-01 02:00 Reply | Quote
Radnyx

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#66419
I've been working on this for a few weeks, and I think I'm finally satisfied with it.

This is the first real original I've completed that isn't just a 4-8 measure ditty.

I really want to know what other people think of it, since I've listened to hit hundreds of times while composing I can't tell what might sound wrong.
So feedback is VERY appreciated.

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Posted: 2015-03-01 04:52 Reply | Quote
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Sounds nice, but I would question the song structure as I can't find a definite chorus lead part to get me hooked on the song, which is a major part of making music.

Posted: 2015-03-01 05:21 Reply | Quote
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The Follin inspired sound design is really nice. I found myself waiting for a repeating theme or melody that never came, but I can also appreciate the wandering, proggy nature of the composition.

Posted: 2015-03-01 05:44 Reply | Quote
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Yeah I see what you guys mean. I was aiming for a prog feel and my mind had a hard time sticking to a specific chorus or melody. It sort of is all over the place. Thank you for the input though.

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Posted: 2015-03-02 20:21 Reply | Quote
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Reminds me of the OST for Silver Surfer and that Tom & Jerry game.

Well done! Sounds awesome!

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