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This is a cool track! I like how it starts out melancholic, then breaks into something even bigger and powerful. Great job capturing the moods, because I can definitely feel it here!
There were a couple of subtle quirks I had with the progressions and melody, though I think the biggest culprit was some of the bass notes you played along with the melody, which I thought could be revised a bit more...
I made a quick edit to the main progression of the song, changing the bass notes while trying to keep most of the melody in-tact. After changing the bass, I changed the first 2 pulses. The melody has some changes, but all the downbeats should be the same. I did change some harmony pitches, though, to accompany for the new chords the bass was implying.
Hope this helps, and I hope you consider amending this revision and applying it to the main song!
EDIT: Whoops, forgot to mention that I noticed the last bass note of the song is C-2, and you should invert it or add a new F-2 bass.
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