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two songs Posted: 2015-02-15 23:17 Reply | Quote
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#65844
"AnotherEnd" is new (as in today) and quite unfinished, but I thought of it while skiing.
"OhTheHumanity" is waaaay old.

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Posted: 2015-02-16 00:43  (Last Edited: 2015-02-16 01:22) Reply | Quote
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Not too bad, you're definitely improving :)
Your melodies are pretty catchy but I think you need to work on a more interesting bass, with more definite chords. And generally making things more interesting with instruments and effects would help too.

Here's a quick example of the sort of things you could add.

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Posted: 2015-02-16 02:22  (Last Edited: 2015-02-16 12:56) Reply | Quote
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I would use effects, but the problem is, I don't know what the effects are.

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Posted: 2015-02-16 05:34 Reply | Quote
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I really liked the melody on Oh,The Humanity...
But I hated it was so short (the over all song, not the melody)


I hope you don't mind the edit (and sorry beforehand).

In your melody I only change the placement of one note that seemed a bit off on the triangle channel (not sure if intended). Everything else is intact. I just added a Big Chord of C and a Trumpet and Clarinet (yes, I did an VCR7 expansion).



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Posted: 2015-02-16 12:43 Reply | Quote
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Oh, no, no, no, no, no, I don't mind at all! It is great!

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Posted: 2015-02-16 15:32  (Last Edited: 2015-02-16 15:36) Reply | Quote
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[quote=MiniMacro]I would use effects, but the problem is, I don't know what the effects are. [/quote]

There is an effect list in the help document that comes with famitracker. To access it, you click on "Help" in the upper right corner and then "Effect Table". There you can see all effects, what they do, and if you click them you can see how to use them.

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Posted: 2015-02-16 15:35 Reply | Quote
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Oh, okay!

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Posted: 2015-02-18 13:30 Reply | Quote
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#65975
My help file doesn't work.

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Posted: 2015-02-18 14:20 Reply | Quote
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Try [url=http://famitracker.com/wiki/index.php?title=Effect_list]this.

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Posted: 2015-02-18 14:30 Reply | Quote
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Okay! Thanks!

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