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I guess I'll say some things.
What I think is that you should try to see how to use notes and make them sound good. Here are some things you can try.
Try to put notes in places where you think "make sense" (it looks like you kinda know that though, maybe even more than me xD). Try not to repeat the same note as much as you did, but try to use notes that are kinda close (like 2-4 notes) to the last one most times (like C3 D3 B2 C3 E3 D3 and not C3 G4 B4 A2 D2 F4 or A3 A3 A3 B3 B3 C4). Repeating some parts can sound good, changing parts of them each time they repeat can be good, like making the repeat lower than what you're repeating. Not changing is fine a lot of times though.
I don't know if any of this made sense but I'll put an edited file here. Maybe you can see it and see what I did (maybe it would be better without the echo I put in xD), or maybe see some music theory.
You're getting better, mostly at placing notes, though. xD
I've heard a couple of your tracks now, and all of your tracks have had a good ground, but lets face it, they have all had the same problem with being kind of boring to listen to and not utilizing the channels very well.
I've seen how other trackers have taken their time to try to help you by giving you good advice, but you don't seem to listen. You just make more tracks with the same problems.
I recommend that you take the advice that everybody tells you instead of giving them the excuse that you work with music in other ways, but aren't good with trackers. If you listen to tips from people that are more experienced than you, you'll quickly become better with famitracker!
I'm not mad, I just felt like someone needed to make this post at some point or another.
Also, i'll send my edit of your song, just because.
Have a great day, and good luck with famitracker!
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