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sproibg2: The shakers are pretty much inaudible, but that's the only thing I think there is to criticize here, it's well put together, and using the pulse width modulation on the VRC6 for string ensemble is done amazingly!
sumpber2: This isn't bad either, but V04 does nothing on the 2a03 pulse channels, it's the same thing as a V01 (25% duty)
Welcome, and enjoy your stay and contine to post things like this, I definitely eat this stuff up.
For the most part, these are wonderful renditions on the original tracks! In addition to the things za909 stated, there were a couple of notation quirks I noticed.
I believe that the last pattern of the spring track has a different harmony from the original, so do you think you can double-check that? Row 0C plays a G#3 on VRC6 Pulse 1, but I think it should be playing an F#3. Perhaps check the harmony notes around it too, because I don't recall it playing G# during that chord.
For the summer track, pattern 05 has a sour chord starting at row 20... Perhaps consider changing the C-5 notes on Pulse 1 to D-5, from row 20 to the end? The strumming is a bit on the loud end too, so maybe consider lowering its volume a tiny bit.
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