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Little Thing I Made Last Summer Posted: 2015-02-07 22:50 Reply | Quote
LordAndrew



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A little song I made a while ago.
I'm posting this because I really don't know how I could improve it


I'm glad this survived- the computer I made it on crashed and it only survived as a backup on a friend's computer.

Let me know what you think- I have more where this came from


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Posted: 2015-02-08 06:38 Reply | Quote
CheeseGuy99

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Ok, so, composition-wise, this sounds pretty good. Although, I do have to say, the background gets pretty repetitive. What annoys me the most, though, is how fatiguing the lead is to listen to. It needs more note cuts. For example, try humming the lead along with it, not cutting unless it cuts. You get out of breath. This is a problem. Here, this little edit should help.

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Some other places I've tried to conquer:
[url=http://chipmusic.org/ch3dd4r]Le Chipmusic
[url=http://battleofthebits.org/barracks/Profile/CH3DD4R/]Le BattleOfTheBits

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