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First post, but not first original Posted: 2015-02-01 14:32  (Last Edited: 2015-02-02 08:46) Reply | Quote
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Hello, this is my first post on the famitracker forum.

This song is an original by me. It's [b]not[/b] my first song. I've actually worked with famitracker for about 1½ years, and have made a lot of remakes and a few originals.

I was going for something electro-house-like, but i have no idea what genre to sort it in now.

Anyway, I hope you like it. Feel free to tell me what you thougt of it, and if there's something you think I can improve on it.



Oh, and also, the drum-samples I used in this song are not my own. They belong to jrlepage.

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Posted: 2015-02-01 15:27 Reply | Quote
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Hey, this is actually not even half bad! The only thing I would personally change is the volume of the bleepy sound effects made with instrument B but other than that, it's a cool little tune!

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Posted: 2015-02-01 18:05  (Last Edited: 2015-02-01 18:05) Reply | Quote
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Hello and welcome to the Famitracker Forum

Actually, this track is rather amazing. There are a lot of newcomers with high hopes, but low experience. This track is done pretty well, I like the melody, the effects and channel usages are pretty good (although the volume balance is a little off, nothing major) and this track is just very fun to listen to .
Just one tip: Try and name your instruments. If there's a mistake in there you can't find, no one will dig into fifty bazillion "New Instrument"s. ^^

Good luck with famitracker and best of luck :D


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Posted: 2015-02-01 18:35  (Last Edited: 2015-02-02 08:35) Reply | Quote
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[quote=za909]Hey, this is actually not even half bad! The only thing I would personally change is the volume of the bleepy sound effects made with instrument B but other than that, it's a cool little tune![/quote]

[quote=Alexander283]Hello and welcome to the Famitracker Forum

Actually, this track is rather amazing. There are a lot of newcomers with high hopes, but low experience. This track is done pretty well, I like the melody, the effects and channel usages are pretty good (although the volume balance is a little off, nothing major) and this track is just very fun to listen to .
Just one tip: Try and name your instruments. If there's a mistake in there you can't find, no one will dig into fifty bazillion "New Instrument"s. ^^

Good luck with famitracker and best of luck :D
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Thanks for the good advice! I changed the volume of instrument 0B and 0D (the blippy things) as low as i could without making the base sound empty when they were playing, and i added names to all of the instruments. Thanks again!

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Posted: 2015-02-01 18:46  (Last Edited: 2015-02-01 18:46) Reply | Quote
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Gotta hand it to you - I really love the cords în frame 13 (Hex 0D). Cool effects, lots of variety and neat sounds.
One thing about thw instruments - 04 isn't unused. You used it for the P-Noise in frame 36 (Hex 24) ^^
And in general - why would you have unused instruments? You know you can delete them, right?

Good luck and keep making those things, I really like what you did there

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Posted: 2015-02-02 08:45 Reply | Quote
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[quote=Alexander283]Gotta hand it to you - I really love the cords în frame 13 (Hex 0D). Cool effects, lots of variety and neat sounds.
One thing about thw instruments - 04 isn't unused. You used it for the P-Noise in frame 36 (Hex 24) ^^
And in general - why would you have unused instruments? You know you can delete them, right?

Good luck and keep making those things, I really like what you did there [/quote]

Thanks, I liked the chords too, they sound very nice. And thanks for telling me that 04 is used. I didn't notice that myself... I updated the file in my last post to give it a name.

And also, the reason why there are unused instruments is because i didn't notice that they were unused until i named them... Well, that's another reason to name the instruments, right?

Thank you for the tips and support!

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