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Nameless song (original) V2 Posted: 2015-01-10 16:15 Reply | Quote
H_Mister



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#64827
Made improvements to my nameless song (still thinking of one)


Posted: 2015-01-11 03:43 Reply | Quote
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#64835
Cool, but you do know that the Triangle only has two values of volume; 0 and F/15? the Triangle doesn't make anything inbetween so the bass instrument is pretty useless.

Posted: 2015-01-15 18:02 Reply | Quote
ethostar

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This will be vague and totally just my personal reaction, but I found the third section to be a little unsatisfying compared to the rest. I liked the first two melodies and the slight variations of them, but I felt the last section was a little unearned. The piece isn't really long enough to stay that victorious and intense for that long and it feels too dedicated to trying to wrap things up. I love the lead-in to the loop, but feel that before that, things should be toned down a little.

But I'm only critical because I think it sounds great overall and don't want to pretend I like it all equally.

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