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Two songs: What can I improve on? Posted: 2014-11-26 15:00  (Last Edited: 2014-11-26 16:13) Reply | Quote
RoccoW

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Hello there!

So I've finished two FamiTracker tunes so far. I started out working with LSDJ, but I really like this software and hope to make a lot more tunes with it!

The two tunes I've made so far:
- [url=https://soundcloud.com/roccow/xyce-quelle-surprise-vrc6-remix]A remix of xyce's Quelle Surprise (.FTM [url=https://db.tt/nNN4c2VV]here)
- An original song called [url=https://soundcloud.com/roccow/lady-bad-luck-vrc6]Lady Bad Luck (.FTM [url=https://db.tt/4JwJER6w]here)

On the xyce remix, I experimented with combining the Sawtooth and Triangle channels to create a good bassline, though listening to it now, it sounds like a terrible compresser effect or something. So won't be doing that again, probably.

The Lady Bad Luck song features a lot of playing around with sounds, mostly trying to replicate the feeling of FearOfDark's work. Controlling the volume levels to make it sound good was especially difficult on this track. I still feel like some sounds clash to hard, making for unnintentional muddy sounds, especially with the arps on the VRC6 channels. Besides that, the song was also a way to practice a bit more variety in composition, since I mostly produce electronic dance inspired tunes with a very standard, drop-heavy composition.


I would love to hear you guys' thoughts on these tracks and receive some tips on how to make future songs better! Thanks in advance :D

Posted: 2014-11-26 16:03 Reply | Quote
Alexander283

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Hello and Welcome to Famitracker Forums!

First off - it would be VERY helpful if you could upload the FTM right here. Would be much more conveniant.
But from what I can tell from the sound of the track itself, "Quelle Surprise" sounds delightful and light-hearted. Also, I don't immediately hear any glaring technical issues and the arps sound pretty sweet. About that "terrible compressor effect" - try and add some fine pitch to the tracks (P7F and/or P81) to make them differentiated from each other. Or - if it happens to work that way - set them to different octaves. Like the Saw plays notes on Oct 1 and the Tri plays Oct 3 (which will translate to Oct 2 trough the double period length).

Your original song "Lady Bad Luck" has just about the same style. It's just that the VRC6 Saw is pretty under-Utilized.
One point I fully appove are the volume controls - everything sounds well-rounded on both tracks.

All in all, really solid and well done tracks

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Posted: 2014-11-26 16:20 Reply | Quote
RoccoW

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[quote=Alexander283]Hello and Welcome to Famitracker Forums!

First off - it would be VERY helpful if you could upload the FTM right here. Would be much more conveniant.
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Whoops, good point! I've edited the post so it shows the FTM files and links directly to them Thank you very much for your reply! Very helpful stuff! Much appreciated :D

Posted: 2014-11-26 17:27 Reply | Quote
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You're welcome ^^
You can also upload your files directly underneat your post (check Attachment, Select file, press "Upload"

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Posted: 2014-11-26 17:27  (Last Edited: 2014-11-26 17:27) Reply | Quote
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DAMMIT
Sorry, double post :-/
Please Delete!

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Posted: 2014-11-26 18:33 Reply | Quote
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Awesome tracks, I love how upbeat they are. I feel like if they were on a really hard level of a game they would help keep the player in good spirits even though they had died 63 times so far!

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