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1. Not bad, kinda creepy. It works if that's what you're going for.
2. Um...
3. Be careful with playing notes of the same pitch. You might want to change these to a chord harmony rather than just octave differences. It could give the songs a bit more life.
4. My same crit applies from the 3rd song.
5. I can't say I like the composition of this. The intro is good, but the main melody is too loud and drowns out everything else. Your use of DPCM here is good though.
6. Now this is a song I really like! This feels like a heavy boss theme, nice composition, kinda frantic, really good all around. Definitely the best so far.
Overall, your sound design in the instruments is pretty good, but you need to work on some of the composition aspects.
Song #1 - I only had to listen to the first 4-6 notes. Lavender Town.
Song #3 - I really liked the lead part at frame 04. But the rest of the song feels really forgettable for me
Song #4 - That intro sounds awfully familiar to me, but I can't quite put my finger on it.
Song #5 - Like Threxx said, the main melody is too loud. This song just feels really monotonous, and it would probably get on my nerves after 4 minutes or so.
Song #6 - This one is actually pretty good! My favorite parts were frames 06-07.
My suggestion is to do more with the music. There are a lot of places that just seem empty or forgettable.
Here's the remake of song 6 you asked for a while back.
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