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[quote=FlareDragon]Hey. Just wanted to post up a tune I'd made earlier. It's going well, except that I have no idea where to go next.
So any opinions?[/quote]
Hey there!
I actually liked this a bunch. It needs volume balancing, effects that add a bit of flavour and in a few places some extra stuff going on, but other than that the composition is really great. It is very relaxing tune to listen to. This would be a really cool track in a NES game. :D
I felt inspired to help you out with your instrumentation, so I remade your little tune with some more advanced instrument envelopes. I also added some extra bits here and there to fill in some of the gaps. Even if you don't like any of the things I added just analyse the instrumentation and hopefully you will learn something from it.
In case you wonder about anything just ask, and I'll try to explain.
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[quote=Curious][quote=FlareDragon]Hey. Just wanted to post up a tune I'd made earlier. It's going well, except that I have no idea where to go next.
So any opinions?[/quote]
Hey there!
I actually liked this a bunch. It needs volume balancing, effects that add a bit of flavour and in a few places some extra stuff going on, but other than that the composition is really great. It is very relaxing tune to listen to. This would be a really cool track in a NES game. :D
I felt inspired to help you out with your instrumentation, so I remade your little tune with some more advanced instrument envelopes. I also added some extra bits here and there to fill in some of the gaps. Even if you don't like any of the things I added just analyse the instrumentation and hopefully you will learn something from it.
In case you wonder about anything just ask, and I'll try to explain. [/quote]
Thanks for the reply. To put it simply: I really love this edit!
There are points in the triangle melody that kinda stuck out at first, but listening to it a few times...it's sounds epic. I'll be sure to look at the intstrumentation and learn from it. Again, thanks ^u^
