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I think you need to read up on some of the benefits of a good mix. I'm not saying it's bad, the melodies are good, but they could use some work.
You should ease up on the envelopes a bit, for sure.. It sounds somewhat similar to someone pushing all the keys on a piano all at the same time. What you could try to do is keep frequencies separate. For instance, bass notes low, melodies high, etc. Each "instrument" or "part" should have their own placement in the frequency spectrum, so things don't muck everything and stays separate, but mixes well.
Anyway, like I said, it's not bad, but you certainly should play around a little more, perhaps even use some "rests" here and there, and quicker envelopes on some of the "drums" (which could also use some work)
wow very helpful thank you i was wondering why my songs sounded like shit, im gonna post a fixed song here later and u tell me if it sound better or not