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I decided to start using Famitracker this week and I want to use this thread so I have somewhere to log my progress. I'm new to composing in general so it'd be cool to get some critique so I can improve!
You seem to be very good at composing stuff. But, I think you should work on the percussion more. It feels incomplete at frames 04-06. Check out my edit.
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I think it sounds better without percussion actually, but it sounds nice both ways.
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sorry for not replying. -n-Posted: 2015-01-10 03:37
GEEZ, I can't beleive it's taken me this long to get back here I made a few other tracks after this one, and then got frustrated when they sounded bad, and I gave up and did other things for a while. Sometimes, I find it difficult to come up with things I feel comfortable showing to other people
Anyway, thanks for the comments and stuff and I learned a bit from that edit you made, MMK so thanks for that too!
I'll try to post more frequently when I need help on things, kinda feel bad for leaving yall hanging.
Anyway here's something I just randomly came up with. I'm just calling it Audiodemo2, because i'm just that great at coming up with names =)
I strongly advise using the [url=http://www.famitracker.com/wiki/index.php?title=Pxx]Pxx effect for [url=http://www.famitracker.com/wiki/index.php?title=How_to_make_echo]two channel echoes and [url=http://www.famitracker.com/wiki/index.php?title=How_to_make_chorusing]choruses, it makes them sound so much better. It should also be used when two channels clash on the same note. (Even if they are an octave apart.)
I made a fix which you can get below. Here are the changes I made:
[li]Added Pxx effects[/li][li]Added a small amount of vibrato to the Pulse 2 instrument[/li][li]Added an echo lead to the Pulse 2 lead at frames 02-03[/li][li]Changed one note[/li]
Thanks for that tip! This one's a tad rushed because I just wanted to try the pitch thing very breifly and also make basic drums. One thing I have trouble with a lot when I try to make music in general tends to be me trying to come up with a melody and also the progression of a song from the intro to the main body of the song. So I just have to make a mental note to maybe study this more in the future.