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flor@ - stolen jewels Posted: 2014-07-14 07:45 Reply | Quote
FloraSora

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#59390
This is WIP as of now, but I'd love to hear what some other composers might have to say about this composition so far.

Maybe note how the general piece -feels- and stuff, what have you. I would like to hear your impression of the piece before I continue it much farther.

Thank you for your time, everyone!


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RE: flor@ - stolen jewels Posted: 2014-07-14 08:13 Reply | Quote
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I like what you're doing with the noise channel, sounds pretty cool. The piece as a whole gives me a closing credits sort of vibe.

Posted: 2014-07-14 08:40 Reply | Quote
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Yes, nice job with the noise channel. One thing I should point out is that you have two blank instruments. Is that for a purpose? Other than that, the rest sounds good.

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Posted: 2014-07-14 16:18 Reply | Quote
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I'd settle for Ice Caves, really...

I think that the second blank used to be something else but then it was changed to a blank.

It sounds great so far, but one pedantic issue with the echo; it doesn't have all the notes. That's all I can say.

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Posted: 2014-07-14 16:28 Reply | Quote
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There were some parts where your bass only sounded like two notes hitting, not three, in frames 03-11


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Posted: 2014-07-14 18:15 Reply | Quote
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Sounds a bit like a sewer stage-based music, or an ice cave stage-based, as Poodle said.

Really nice and relaxing. c:

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Posted: 2014-07-14 20:52 Reply | Quote
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Sounds like some sort of crystal mine to me, hence the name?

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Posted: 2014-07-15 07:39 Reply | Quote
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Thank you for the comments everybody, I greatly appreciate all of them! Ice Caves was a nice name, and I was thinking of stealing it for a sec, but I like how mmkthecoolest reminded me that I like the general idea of "Stolen Jewels," and how others can create their own stories based around that theme.

The missing echo is something I left intentionally but I may consider changing that.

Thank you, I always enjoy messing with my noise drums. It's fun!

I like the comment about the "ending theme vibe" by tehmegamastah. Makes me proud... *sniff*

Thanks again, everybody. I'll be sure to post the final product, eventually. :)

Posted: 2014-07-15 16:24 Reply | Quote
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[quote=FloraSora]I was thinking of stealing it for a sec[/quote]
Ha! Nice one!
[quote=FloraSora]The missing echo is something I left intentionally but I may consider changing that.[/quote]
Oh, all right. There's always making more patterns if it bleeds through =)
[quote=FloraSora]Thank you, I always enjoy messing with my noise drums. It's fun![/quote]
+1
[quote=FloraSora]Thanks again, everybody. I'll be sure to post the final product, eventually. [/quote]
=D

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Posted: 2014-07-16 03:18 Reply | Quote
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i really enjoy this. i made some changes to the first 3 frames, particularly the triangle.

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Posted: 2014-07-18 09:31 Reply | Quote
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haha, crazy stuff, I like it that crazy bass! I'm glad you enjoy the piece as well. <3 Thank you, edits are always fun!

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