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Made my first album, Come Back to Me.
See what you think, it's "name your price" on BandCamp, so support me if you want.
Construtive criticism is always good.
Looks like you've already got a good handle on how to write a good melody! For now, I'd focus on sound design (unless you're going for that old NES games kind of feel), because these sound pretty empty. There are a lot of ways to give your songs some "space" through arpeggios, single- or two-channel echoes, etc.
not bad, but i didn't like them and found them boring... the melodies are okay, and i will agree with L77 that they seem a little empty. it's important to squeeze as much out of the chip as possible when making an album, a lot of this stuff sounds kind of bland and mundane in comparison to a lot of other stuff that's out there
i'm not sure what to offer in regards to suggestions or criticism but exploring all the capabilities of famitracker and what interesting sounds and timbres you can make would be a good idea. play with all the instrument envelopes to see if you can make any interesting sounds
though i'm not in any place to judge originals, i never make any of my own