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[quote=realimbored668]They're not perfect, and if you must be a critic, please do so politely. Any praise is welcome but optional. [/quote]
I would reccomend you downlaod a program called sunvox, or mess around with a midi piano for awhile, your use of harmonics is not the greatest, and it would benifit you to do so. i would also reccomend reading up on the wiki to understand the commands batter, also try to keep your compositions sound range below A. I would severely advise using more instruments. A triangles volume is controlled by the z00 command, and the higher the command is the quieter the triangle and noise are so long as the dpcm does not interfere with it.
Also, you should aim for somthing like this if you are going to use your own harmonics and style.
The wiki also has plenty of useful commands.
The below song is the way your song should have sounded if you were to not make it extremely loud and clippy.
all in all your first composition was better than mine, but i would recommend a lot more practice before you start posting threads, posting in the short loops thread might be the best for you right now.
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[quote=Ares64]something tells me this is The Real iGotno_scope
welcome back mate[/quote]
That's not nice, iGotno_scope seems to speak in relatively poor english, and his music was a lot more... "I think I'm good enough to try this next concept now" - ish than this.
I have no criticisms, because there's not one thing I can pick from this mess. I'd say that you should learn some musical theory (mainly structural), and come back. No, online video lessons won't work. You need a real instructor of some sort, whether it be a friend who knows theory very well, or a real music instructor, you need to learn some theory.
Remember, in FT, the default highlights are in 4/4 time, the bright highlight is the measure, and the dimmer highlight is the beat. I couldn't really apply too much structural theory until I realised that, so it's nice to know.
You know what? I'm going to try and remix one of these. Neither have any basis in sanity or musical structure, but hey! What the heck!
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Even if I tried really hard, I don't think I could achieve writing this kind of song. It actually amazes me somewhat. I wish I could hear it the way the writer hears it. Cuz my brain just doesn't comprehend this.
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