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Green Hill Cover Posted: 2014-01-12 03:59 Reply | Quote
eMarshmallow

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#53644
Hey guys, this is my first famitracker song so i'd love ALL the feedback. Give me the good, the bad, and the ugly! I have absolutely no clue how to create instruments so that would be helpful too


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Posted: 2014-01-12 04:19 Reply | Quote
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#53646
actually pretty good for your first song

the high notes in the first pulse 2 on the last few frames are a bit grating

also the loop doesn't work properly

and as far as instruments go, i could explain them but i'm sure someone else can do it better
Posted: 2014-01-12 04:27 Reply | Quote
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ty :D I couldn't figure out a way to loop the song correctly without re-writing the whole thing :/ at least I know my problem and now I can fix it

Posted: 2014-01-12 06:12 Reply | Quote
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#53652
1. Fixed the loop for you.
2. Please try not to change the tempo from 150 as it creates some glitches that mess up the speed a bit.

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Posted: 2014-01-12 17:27 Reply | Quote
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Thanks! How'd you get the last frame to be a different size than the others?
Posted: 2014-01-12 17:45 Reply | Quote
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#53665
put a Bxx or Dxx command on a row and it'll automatically resize it to make the last row the one with the command on it

Bxx loops the song round to the frame specified, so B00 would loop back up to the beginning, B01 would loop to frame 01 (the second frame), etc

Dxx loops the song to the specified row in the next frame, so D00 would loop it to the first row in the next frame, D01 would loop it to row 01 (the second row), etc
Posted: 2014-01-17 14:03 Reply | Quote
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#53786
sounds good for a first
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RE: Green Hill Cover Posted: 2014-01-20 23:07 Reply | Quote
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This is pretty good if this is your first song
May I suggest you create instruments with better volume envelopes? I slightly changed the percussion to show you what I mean.
I hope you come back improving your skills

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Posted: 2014-01-25 22:25 Reply | Quote
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Thank you SO much everybody! I didn't have a clue how to operate Famitracker and you've all been really helpful
-ExplodingMarshmallow
Posted: 2014-02-10 20:05 Reply | Quote
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Kinda reminds me of that Somari pirate, but less V01 "screeching"
Posted: 2014-02-10 21:40 Reply | Quote
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[quote=Heltonium]Kinda reminds me of that Somari pirate, but less V01 "screeching"[/quote]
That is rude and inaccurate. This cover is largely note-accurate, while somari had pretty much nothing right. Not even timings.

Please refrain from using disses of such calibre, you might cause flame wars. Refer to my signature if you must know why I say such.
Posted: 2014-02-10 23:46 Reply | Quote
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[busts open door] flame war huh
Posted: 2014-02-13 03:05 Reply | Quote
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[quote=Heltonium]Kinda reminds me of that Somari pirate, but less V01 "screeching"[/quote]
Are- are you trolling?
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Posted: 2014-02-13 09:44 Reply | Quote
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the flame war begins

rally the incendiary troops

THE ICE REGION DIES TONIGHT
Posted: 2014-03-04 01:58  (Last Edited: 2014-03-04 01:58) Reply | Quote
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Sorry.

I'm not trolling, I'm giving my honest opinion. But it's decent otherwise.
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