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VRC6 Original Piece Posted: 2013-12-13 01:48

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LazyPoltergeist

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#52984

Hi guys,

Here's something I've been working on for a while now. Criticism and feedback is encouraged – I haven't been at tracking for long, so I imagine I'm as fallible as you would expect. I'm proud of it, but I thought it might benefit from some more experienced ears.

I recognize that it's sort of busy composition-wise (that was actually kind of what I was going for), so comments pertaining to instruments and sound textures might be more useful.

Thanks!

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Posted: 2013-12-13 02:11 (Last Edited: 2013-12-13 02:12)

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Dwedit

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#52985

Ecchh.... not good at all.

Don't ever use odd duty cycles on the saw channel. Ever. Don't even think about it.

Get rid of the horrible duty cycle envelope on the first square channel, and get rid of the odd duty cycle on the saw channel, then it becomes a lot more listenable.

Then raise the saw channel one more octave while you're at it.

Posted: 2013-12-13 02:19

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LazyPoltergeist

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#52986

Noted! Thanks for the tips.

Posted: 2014-02-08 07:06

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drexegar

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#54185

This is awesome! Love it! Nice melodies and bass!

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Posted: 2014-02-15 03:10

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#54385

It sounds a bit too heavy and loud, you may want t o lower the volume by about 2 to 3 on each channel (excluding Triangle and DPCM, which you can't)

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