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NSP/MGMT: Dinosaur Lazer Fight/Kids Posted: 2013-11-30 11:01 Reply | Quote
JKLOL

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#52661
hey, i made some more covers. So what do you guys think?


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Posted: 2013-11-30 15:25 Reply | Quote
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This stuff is good, but you should try note releases. c:

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Posted: 2013-11-30 18:26 Reply | Quote
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V04 IS NOT A THING ON PULSES ONE AND TWO

Here, I made one simple change that made the whole NSP song a lot better. I didn't touch the rest of the song because of your love of horribly low duty cycles and note halts. It really hurt my ears, especially since all of the instruments were wrong.

Just a thing to keep in mind: Danny's voice sounds more like V03 than V00, and when he layers himself on himself, it sounds like V03 and V02. And Ninjab Ryan's stock sawtooth pad doesn't sound like VRC6 V00. It sounds more like V02-4 on the VRC6.


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Posted: 2013-11-30 20:17 Reply | Quote
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[quote=]I didn't touch the rest of the song because of your love of horribly low duty cycles and note halts.[/quote]

No, if you think there's something wrong with the song when it comes to the note halts, then please change it so that way I can learn from my mistakes and learn new ways to handle volume control.

Don't just change one aspect of the song, and keep criticizing the songs more without [u]showing[/u] what i can at least do to improve these.

Yes, you gave me some pointers on duty, and i thank you. But please, if your going to criticize the song, fix the entire song so I know what I can do better. Thank you for your feedback.

Posted: 2013-12-01 00:08 Reply | Quote
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#52695
It's not the critic's job to fix your music. It's the critics job to do well when trying to give constructive criticism. Fixing the whole song is not constructive criticism, as you don't get the experience of trying it the right way. But, changing a small part of the song to show how it's done IS constructive criticism, as it allows you to see how it's done and structure your own fixing of the song around it.

That, and I have, at most, an hour of my day to give to music, so I can't spend all of it fixing someone else's music to help them.

Posted: 2013-12-01 03:47 Reply | Quote
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I actually like the low duty cycles here. They fit. Unless you want the leads to sound like DSB's voice and the actual instruments, in which case you should follow Solt's advice.

Posted: 2013-12-01 05:23 Reply | Quote
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Was actually not trying to make them actual instruments.

Thanks for the feedback! :D

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