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Yay! First song! Posted: 2009-07-28 06:56 Reply | Quote
Kneecaps



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#3447
I hope you don't hate it. It's for a game I'm working on.


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Posted: 2009-07-28 07:10 Reply | Quote
Shiru



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#3448
Good for first. Things you must improve first - dynamic control (volume of certain notes, especially for hats, which are sounds very mechanically for now), and pitch effects (vibrato and portamento).

I've also noticed that you have bass notes separated by just semitone - is this was made intentionally?

Posted: 2009-07-29 03:06 Reply | Quote
Kneecaps



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#3462
Thanks for the feedback! I agree about the hi hats, as they really became annoying after a few repeat listens. I'll try to work on adding a few pitch effects, and possibly adding more diversity to the rhythms.

Can you point out where the bass notes have that problem? I can't exactly see what you're talking about with that, unfortunately.

Posted: 2009-08-02 14:53 Reply | Quote
Shiru



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#3510
Frame 1, row 10 (square 1 and triangle). For second look they don't seem to be problem, though they could be if you'll try to move triangle to square 2, just for test.

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