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Vacation Posted: 2013-06-24 14:24  (Last Edited: 2013-06-24 23:45) Reply | Quote
BiscuitsForPony



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#48791
Weeks in Bolivia; who could wish for more?

Made these over several hours of flight time with a little bit of in-house time as well.

Only one's finished (guess which; it may be harder than you think!),the other ones, who know what'll happen to them, but I may as well show them here as they won't get heard by anyone else any other way (that, and if I can give a little motivation, maybe an idea or two to someone, would satisfy me as well).

Please, lots and lots of constructive criticism.


Bonus points for naming my inspiration.


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nude.ftm (74 Kb)
womph.ftm (152 Kb)
nothing.ftm (133 Kb)
Posted: 2013-06-24 17:56 Reply | Quote
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I'll review these as I hear them. I'll begin with womph. I think it sounds VERY nice. It starts out with a bit of a fezuke style. This dramatic music is stuff I would very much like to write my self. So, just to re-iterate, I love this song.

nude. wtf did you name it nude for? Anyway, as for the actual song, sounds very nice.

nothing. Sounds a bit rushed, actually. My least favorite of these three. I'm going to have to say what womph was my favorite, and the finished one. Was I right?



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Posted: 2013-06-24 21:57  (Last Edited: 2013-06-24 22:10) Reply | Quote
BiscuitsForPony



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Fezuke inspiration, check. Whomph isn't finished at all, though, so I'll dock you points for that. I had originally written most of that on the guitar, and just transfered bits of it to Famitracker; the rest of the song is actually finished, but not transcribed to the FTM.

Nude was the name of the template I had created from the "womph" FTM after clearing it, for the record, and is also what I'd consider the finished one. While not as large, it's what I see as the most tidy one, and the only one with any sort of a conclusion. I'm wondering what made you think it was the other one, just out of sheer curiosity.

And, ahaha, "nothing" was indeed rushed, and, my least favorite of the three as well. That was also on the guitar and transcribed, and more of an experiment than anything else.

Regardless, the compliments are greatly appreciated, and always are motivation to actually finish things. I have a har time with that.

EDIT: For the sake of publication, "womph" was edited to loop more smoothly. As far as that FTM'll get to finished.

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