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FamiTracker
Oh... That's so constructive... I'm stunned by how harsh your comment is. By the way... Your stuff is awesome. You're one of my favorite ones here on the forums. But I guess you're just a douche bag!
You asked that I think, I answered. You didn't asked for constructive critics.
And don't get me wrong, very first works isn't bad thing, but there is not much sense to publish them asking for opinions, as well as critics too. Only thing anybody can suggest you for now - continue and try to improve everything.
Well... I guess I overreacted. But I have one thing to ask you? Did you just listen to the first song? Because that's my very first song and it's not too good...
Well, his advice is correct - continue and try to improve everything. While I think his attitude is a little strange ("you didn't ask for constructive criticism so you don't get any" ), as far as I know, Russians can be very upfront and honest sometimes.
I didn't managed to express my thoughts in english words, so let's try this way: what you think about [url=http://shiru.untergrund.net/temp/1.mp3]this?
green_candles.ftm the first pattern in first channel is pretty nice.. but the rest is sorta too much mayhem. perhaps try for more dynamic?
press_start.ftm.. the arpeggio is misplaced, but really nice
If you take a look at the song, you've got 3 whole channels with same 00 pattern all over. I would like a bit more dynamic here aswell and not just same thing over and over.
yo_homing_gansta.ftm.. if you like drum n bass maybe u can appreciate this.. but I'm not too much for monotone stuff. (repeative)
your_ears_are_barely_bleeding.ftm.. this could be pretty good if you used dynamic stuff in it. because it actually varies compared to the other tunes
keep on tracking! Also, look at Sliver's .ftms... They are the bomb when it comes to technical stuff (even tho he don't use the new awesome mmc5 and vrc6)
The song I've linked is the beginner stuff indeed, about same level. This song means nothing special for Weirdbananas because it isn't his, so he can be objective on it, and he probably can learn what other people could say him about his songs at this point, as well as what he can improve in his own songs.
