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[VRC6, through-composed] Super Unstoppable Posted: 2013-05-20 01:51  (Last Edited: 2013-05-20 01:52) Reply | Quote
m4dek

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#47822
Alright, so, uhh... this is my first post on the forum! Hello!

This is the third thing that I've written on FT-- a through-composed piece called "Super Unstoppable," written with a sort of "no filter" mentality; whatever I felt like writing, I wrote, so I guess you could call it... experimental? Idk. Call it whatever you want-- I'm not even sold on the name I gave it. But I'm quite happy with how it turned out, given that my experience with the program is still young.

Let me know what you think!


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This is great, but Posted: 2013-05-20 03:58 Reply | Quote
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I think you need to focus more on melody, not just put random notes out of tonality, like you did in some parts. Maybe it'll sound absurd, but i'm hearing a "Tim Follin" vibe in this. After all, i think you have a potential, you just need to learn more about famitracker and 2a03 music.

Posted: 2013-05-20 04:26 Reply | Quote
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Not bad, especially for a third FTM. If there's a central problem, it's lack of sound design (few volume envelopes, limited use of pulse width). Also you should probably put C00 in the last frame to end the piece.

I appreciated the through-composition aspect, it's just a little grating timbre-wise. Hope to hear more from ya.

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Posted: 2013-05-20 05:15 Reply | Quote
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@GoldenShower

I will certainly keep it in mind. I'll probably look back on this later down the road and think similar things-- I've certainly felt that way about some of the code that I've written, haha. Thanks!

@cak

Thanks also! I agree that parts of it were uncomfortable to listen to-- I haven't put much work into the sound design aspects of my FTMs yet, but it'll definitely be more smartly considered / diversified as I write more stuff.

Posted: 2013-05-20 09:36  (Last Edited: 2013-05-20 09:37) Reply | Quote
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Although it's really random, it's pretty inspiring, especially the arrangement!

I think you should make more of this.

Posted: 2013-05-22 14:12 Reply | Quote
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Thanks! =) I definitely will

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