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First time to ever use a tracker Posted: 2009-06-04 08:06 Reply | Quote
texaszombieboy



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#3094
Uh, yeah, hi.

So, this is my first song I managed to play out by ear.

Before I put it up, just wanna say, it's me trying to cover the underwater theme from Super Mario Bros.

That being said? There's a few screw ups. Mostly in the earlier frames. I realize it's pretty lame compared to alot of work here, but this is my first time to use a tracker, and to be honest, I didn't use as many examples. I kinda muddled through it.

Anyway. I've got fairly thick skin when it comes to critism.

So hit me with it. Anything I can improve on?


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Cheez



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#3095
...everything?

Posted: 2009-06-04 09:05  (Last Edited: 2009-06-04 09:06) Reply | Quote
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Well, most of the notes here incorrect. The instruments are also pretty boring. And isn't there supposed to be a third instrument?

Practice some more with other songs before you come back to this one and you'll know what I mean. It's not just that it's "lame", as you put it, but it's also pretty inaccurate.

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