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[2A03]Dimension Of Descention Posted: 2013-04-20 01:26 Reply | Quote
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#46764
Here's the first thing I have uploaded. Let me know if I did a good job or if it could use some improvement in some places. I didn't want to make the bassline too complex on this because I thought it wouldn't go along with the music.

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Posted: 2013-04-20 01:35 Reply | Quote
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Frames 0A-0D sound a little odd to me. Though this may be intentional. Frame 11... what's with that little major-Chinese arp there? It's really out of place and distracted me from the rest of the song. This could have done with a triangle tom, too. Frames 24 and 26 sound a bit off with the harmonisation.

Is that all? Yes. Very good piece overall. Excellent! Though, may I ask, is this a cover or an original?

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Posted: 2013-04-20 01:45 Reply | Quote
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It's an original. 0A-0D is supposed to resemble a delay effect. 24-26 I probably should have slightly changed the tuning of one of the channels and replaced some of the notes, I'm not sure what you mean there. Frame 11 I understand removes some of the rhythmic sound the song had because of those high notes coming from both pulse channels.

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Posted: 2013-04-20 01:55 Reply | Quote
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it's spelled descension (or, less archaically, descent)

and this is rad

Posted: 2013-04-29 19:06  (Last Edited: 2013-04-29 19:06) Reply | Quote
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I like this.... I like this enough to warrant a 9 day bump! My favorite sections are frames 0E-11, 16-19 and 24-2F. :[b][/b])

Posted: 2013-04-29 22:08 Reply | Quote
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this song is much better and more interesting on a technical level than the intro frames would imply. excellent work!

Posted: 2013-05-07 04:55 Reply | Quote
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Yeah, the intro's a bit boring and the chord progression is quite samey at times, but in general it's great. Also nice Tim Follin channeling in some parts (not just instrumentation, either).

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