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This song's name is unknown for now(original) Posted: 2013-02-09 02:23  (Last Edited: 2013-02-09 18:27) Reply | Quote
Mr_Master



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#44167
So this came to my mind after some serious nose bleedings, I don't know why. This is the first worthwhile original I have made so far, but still has some things that I'd like you people to post about, since they didn't satisfy me enough:

1.- All the leads in the song. I think I always fail to make good leads for songs, which leads them to destruction.

2.- The swing section. It's pretty empty and repetitive, and I might think that I didn't put in the right key.

3.- The crazy thing after the swing section.

4.- The solo.

All these things left me wondering if they are good enough to keep them like that, or I should change them with something else. Also, the NSF sounds different than the FTM, mostly in the FDS part.

Anyways, feedback and hints are appreciated.

[size=4]EDIT: New version a few posts below!


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Posted: 2013-02-09 03:53 Reply | Quote
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#44168
1 - same. when in doubt, go up and down scales

2 - swing's always good but it feels out of place here. might wanna either scrap it entirely or turn it into its own song

3 - crazy is fun. make the craziest song ever

4 - i dont know how to even begin to do one of those other than play some notes of a scale really fast

other than that. pretty danged good

Posted: 2013-02-09 06:20 Reply | Quote
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#44171
I like some of the leads, they aren't terrible, I don't get why the swing is there, it has no good intro, it either has to have a good buildup, or none at all. I like the crazy part though. All around it's a nice song, and if you keep up with it it will turn out really nice! (Also 1A-22 could use some triangle :p)

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Posted: 2013-02-09 14:34 Reply | Quote
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#44175
Thanks guys, I'll hopefully make this better by chopping out the swing. I always felt it shouldn't be there. I'll try to change it with something more... fitting.

Ares64: About your post, by going up and down scales you mean something like I should experiment with the notes and try not to stick to one note, right?
And solos aren't my thing, although Rock music is what I have listened all my life.

Doxic, thanks about the leads. I don't hate them, but I wasn't sure if they were good enough. But triangle in frames 1A-22... ummmm... I'll see what I can do.

I'll work into this to replace the swing section, since I thought it was out of place from the beginning, but I didn't know what to put. Also, the crazy section wasn't bad? Really? Well, thanks a lot guys. I'll get to work now.

Posted: 2013-02-09 15:17 Reply | Quote
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#44179
This sounds wonderful. :o

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Posted: 2013-02-09 15:56 Reply | Quote
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#44180
a very original piece. i like it. you improved.

Posted: 2013-02-09 17:33 Reply | Quote
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#44182
This is pretty good. And it's always pleasant to hear originals around here, so keep at it!

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Posted: 2013-02-09 18:26  (Last Edited: 2013-02-12 03:17) Reply | Quote
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#44185
Thanks to all of you. I'd like you to hear the song again since I changed some parts which were absolutely out of place(swing, specifically). So I'm sorry if one of you three liked it because there's no swing in the new one. However, the new section wasn't very worked out, so expect more changes. It's frames 0E to 11. Frames 12 to 15 are more pleasant to me, and now the crazy section has a lot more sense.

The old version is still in the main post. The new one is here.

[size=5]EDIT: Any updates will be here.


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Posted: 2013-02-09 20:34 Reply | Quote
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#44188
I love it. Sounds great. The start could use a bit more. otherwise sounds really good. I love the bass, too. Sorry about Mastersoft being taken already. I'm sure you'll find something else.

Posted: 2013-02-09 21:10 Reply | Quote
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#44195
Oh, it's OK. Maybe I'll find a better name in some time. And the bass is pretty good. I specially liked the bass of frames 02 to 06. Thanks for your post. But what did you mean by[quote=CheeseGuy99]The start could use a bit more.[/quote]???

Posted: 2013-02-09 21:41 Reply | Quote
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#44198
New version three posts above!

Posted: 2013-02-09 22:21 Reply | Quote
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#44200
what he means, is the beginning is rather blank and boring to listen. maybe tweaking the instruments would fix this.

Posted: 2013-02-10 00:52 Reply | Quote
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@Djizzer5

Yeah, that's what I meant. afterwards sounds REALLY good.

Posted: 2013-02-11 00:32 Reply | Quote
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#44256
My main idea was to give a silly intro to continue with the real song later. I intended to make something really quiet to blast everything else once the first two frames have finished.

By the way, I lost internet connection at home so I may not be posting for the next days. Once I get it back I'll update the song again.

Posted: 2013-02-11 07:37 Reply | Quote
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#44281
Oh, i know how you feel... -3-

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