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Yet another nameless original. Posted: 2012-09-18 06:43 (Last Edited: 2012-09-18 06:45)

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#39691

Here it is. it's rather simple, but I felt it was long enough to have it's own thread. My plan was to make a 8-bit yet classic-rock style song. tell me how I did.

EDIT oops. here it is. sorry.

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Posted: 2012-09-18 18:03

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#39695

its missing a drop in it. i was expecting more action but no.

also, the main melody doesnt match the rest good. it makes a feeling, that you've put it in here just to let it be there.

Posted: 2012-09-19 04:16

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[quote=DjJizzer5]the main melody doesnt match the rest good. it makes a feeling, that you've put it in here just to let it be there.[/quote]Agreed.

The melody strays off-key a few times and just seems to talk without having anything to say.

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Posted: 2012-09-19 04:35

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#39715

Also agree, I had no idea where the song was going, but I didn't think it was that "clashy" it just didn't really feel good

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