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Mario Party ripoff (MMC5) Posted: 2011-09-18 23:21 Reply | Quote
za909

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#23183
But a pretty good ripoff it was.



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Posted: 2011-09-19 11:39 Reply | Quote
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And a pretty damned good sounding ftm this is.

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Posted: 2011-09-19 16:29 Reply | Quote
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#23213
Nice nice nice!
If I could offer any critique, it would be this: you could further refine this tune with some clever volume envelopes. What I mean is, on the longer notes, you could make them decrescendo and crescendo with volume to add some movement to them. Also, since you have essentially the same instrument playing chords and lead, there is often some overlap in notes - consider using a P81 command on the lead channel to add some thickening to the sound.

With just some minor tweaks, this could go from good to great. Nice tune!



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Posted: 2011-09-19 18:39 Reply | Quote
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#23226
Hmm is it any better now?


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