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First Pixel (My First Song) Posted: 2011-09-04 07:09 Reply | Quote
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Well, this is my first song, and I only have the most basic/rudimentary knowledge possible.
Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.

Comments, questions, suggestions, thoughts?

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Posted: 2011-09-04 08:24 Reply | Quote
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Welcome to the forums!

The Module sounds actually good for a first song,especially an original. It is repetitive at the beginning,though there is definitely (like with everyone else, including myself) room for improvement. Try out the volume column, okay? I think it'll help.

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Posted: 2011-09-04 08:25 Reply | Quote
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This is decent for a first try, you have the notes down so it doesn't sound like nails on a chalkboard..

The first thing I would suggest to you as this is your first song, is to try using the volume column to control, well, the volume of each channel. (with the exception of the triangle channel which is either full or nothing)
this control is useful as you can use it to slowly (or quickly) fade out volume as opposed to just cutting the note right then and there.

I've attached a very basic example of how this technique is applied

Good luck tracking!

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