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Concentration Posted: 2011-08-21 23:55 Reply | Quote
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Hey everyone, what I've got here is my first original that is actually decent. Just leave any ideas, suggestions, and anything else in the comments. Thanks!

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RE: Concentration Posted: 2011-08-22 01:05 Reply | Quote
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Welcome to the forums!

I think this needs a little less of the constant noise channel, noise sounds better+realistic when you use it for a drum, or a kick, but that wasn't a huge problem.

Also, you have a volume set in triangle, the triangle volume is unaffected by it, only 0/F will affect it. Like and on and off switch

This is a good first song, but you need more variety, During the time I listened to this, it bored me a little.

Sorry if I came off too critical, But this is a OK first try, considering you have a good time signature and know the channels.


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I actually tried to go a different route with this song, but when I cut one part to add the very beginning, I accidentally cut part of that too, and I forgot the part I first cut. So I had to restart and it eventually became this. It would help me much more if I knew how many spaces are needed for certain notes, i.e. half notes, whole notes, etc.

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Posted: 2011-08-22 04:05 Reply | Quote
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[quote=Bari10]I actually tried to go a different route with this song, but when I cut one part to add the very beginning, I accidentally cut part of that too, and I forgot the part I first cut. So I had to restart and it eventually became this. It would help me much more if I knew how many spaces are needed for certain notes, i.e. half notes, whole notes, etc. [/quote]
I think at a speed of 6, 4 rows= a quater note.

Also check out [url=http://famitracker.shoodot.net/forum/posts.php?id=1009]this thread

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Posted: 2011-08-22 04:19 Reply | Quote
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Thanks. I also did a little looking myself, but this still helped.

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Just so you know Concentration is already a song name and it's a pretty well known VGM: [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sz_vHtPU_HA] oh the memories

As for the module itself, it's fucking rubbish, no offense.

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[quote=DalekSam]As for the module itself, it's fucking rubbish, no offense.[/quote]
I would replace it with one of action 52s songs any day!
(hinting that it is better than a good half of them)

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Posted: 2011-08-23 00:45 Reply | Quote
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[quote=DalekSam]Just so you know Concentration is already a song name and it's a pretty well known VGM.[/quote]

I wasn't sure what to call it, so I just named it something. I'm not the best at naming.

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