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Water theme (original) Posted: 2011-08-07 20:46

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Elfman_Rox

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#21104

Hey guys. I'm fairly new to FamiTracker and even newer to the forum, but I thought it was time I started getting critiques.

What I was going for here was a theme for a swimming/ocean level. Thoughts?

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Posted: 2011-08-07 21:03

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eurgh

This lacks a basic melody, and it would have been nice if there was a beat.

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Posted: 2011-08-07 21:23 (Last Edited: 2012-10-25 07:49)

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RE: Water theme (original) Posted: 2011-08-07 23:28

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#21112

I like it, but gyms is right.
I also got bored...

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Posted: 2011-08-08 13:26

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gyms wrote:

Hey Elfman_Rox, welcome to the forums. I made a couple of edits for your consideration

Thanks for the in-depth feedback! I'll keep all of those points in mind next time (and I'll try to use more variety, as some said it was boring).

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Posted: 2011-08-08 13:26

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gyms wrote:

Hey Elfman_Rox, welcome to the forums. I made a couple of edits for your consideration

Thanks for the in-depth feedback! I'll keep all of those points in mind next time (and I'll try to use more variety, as some said it was boring).

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