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Some originals Posted: 2011-06-04 07:24

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XenonOdyssey

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#17952

'Sup guys.

Figured I'd post some originals of mine for some critique. They are as follows:

Origination - title screen
Intrepidity - "castle" theme
Ardent - like a BOSS

I like the simplicity of Intrepidity, but was wondering if there were any other tricks I could learn to improve it (if it needs improving, that is).

Bear in mind these are from a n00b; Origination was the first song I ever did with a tracker program.

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Posted: 2011-06-04 22:21 (Last Edited: 2011-06-04 22:21)

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I like the mood that you've set in the song Ardent (track 3). This track, though, sounds more suited for an actual level in my opinion.

I feel that, even if others may see this as basic, that your works is promising; I'm sure you'll learn more tracking tricks as you keep on creating.

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Posted: 2011-06-05 03:45

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#17972

These are very good!

I just wish you put the FTM here too.

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