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Unlimited Posted: 2011-06-04 01:12 Reply | Quote
yucca70

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#17933
I know every one has been telling me to cover a song, And I'm still deciding, but, I want to see if one of my older song sound good, I was told It was good. I don't know...


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Posted: 2011-06-04 02:06  (Last Edited: 2011-06-04 02:10) Reply | Quote
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In my opinion, it sounds very close to my first OST in terms of note progression & overall simplicity. My beef with this, though, is the fact that there's overwhelming discord on lines 00 & 01. Couple this with the fact that all notes play at volume F & that's what puts me off a bit from this song.

It's still a song (albeit basic,) but it does need improvement because it shows that there's still much about music that you haven't explored yet.

If you're just looking for something fairly simple, but without much in the way of discord, have a look at my example (which also includes a cover of the song Dominique, from the singing nun). :P

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