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This UST will be used for a game Knightz. (probably a top down shooter)
Elite Mission is meant to be looped once or twice. (used in the start of a mission)
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Before War is supposed to be a not so happy song, but not to depressing song, will be used for a main menu.
Volcana is the Main continents capital because all of the military is made there. the place is filled with active volcanoes and high concrete houses.
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The song Before war had a pretty nice overtone, but the actual notes in the squares really messed up the direction of it. I do actually like this over some of your other songs, but by a slim margin. Needs improvement, but an okay start.
The Song Elite Mission sounds like a jumble of notes to me, i can't find any redeeming qualities to it at all. The beat was all over the place and the sound in square one was way too loud. It had me frustrated halfway through the second pass, and does not sound even close to 'a start of a mission' kind of tone. Also, the noise channel was much too basic. Needs a lot of work.
I have seen improvement from when you first started, but not enough for me to say you are getting better; you need a lot more work. Don't be discouraged by opinion though, just keep trying, maybe look up some tutorials. I'm pretty sure dan made a nice one, it helped me get started.
Anyways, I believe that you'll eventually get better, but you need to start looking up the theory more, and proof-hear your work.
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I have just seen space ray, and it has much of the same problems as before, and I think I know what you do in your songs. You are afraid to take any risks and never have more than one thing going on at a time, and the songs get boring/annoying/simple. Take more risks.
Best of luck.
