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So the Post([url=]http://famitracker.shoodot.net/forum/posts.php?id=2027)I had put up about the lords im making songs of, im redoing.
first there not lords, there guardians of an ancient treasure.
Water guardian, Sonar
fire guardian, Scorch
Tropic guardian, Scar
Mechanical guardian, Gear
Weather guardian, Bolt
Power guardian, Rock
Antagonist, Draco
I also uploaded a more detailed picture of Sonar
EDIT I edited the beat and melody a bit.
You need more variation in your track, in my opinion; a little change in notes & mood should help in improving your song a bit (but trust me; you still have the ground theory needed in music for it to be good).
Just a change here or there; something like a change in scale on your triangle channel that will cause your other channels to fluctuate accordingly, before they return back to your main theme; that's syncopation.
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Sounds actually quite generic new guy stuff to me.
Nice generic new guy stuff. It involved both things less generic (like continuous speed switches) and things more generic by alot (such as use of an f05-f06 speed change)