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Posted: 2011-04-20 06:45  (Last Edited: 2012-10-25 07:33) Reply | Quote
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Posted: 2011-04-20 13:28 Reply | Quote
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#16092
Catchy and fun. Cool track!

Posted: 2011-04-20 14:31 Reply | Quote
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#16094
Cheesy pop tune indeed. Needs some lyrics:

boi frand
on the pc
playin a game
why don't you play with me, oh
boi frand
writin a song
come over here
baby it's been too long
oh boi

boi frand
you're such a nerd
that stuff's for kids
baby haven't you heard, oh
boi frand
...

Posted: 2011-04-20 17:15  (Last Edited: 2012-10-25 07:33) Reply | Quote
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Posted: 2011-04-20 18:40 Reply | Quote
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[quote=MrFTBN]Cheesy pop tune indeed. Needs some lyrics:

boi frand
on the pc
playin a game
why don't you play with me, oh
boi frand
writin a song
come over here
baby it's been too long
oh boi

boi frand
you're such a nerd
that stuff's for kids
baby haven't you heard, oh
boi frand
...[/quote]
Please complete this and you will be given the status of awesome.

Posted: 2011-04-20 18:54 Reply | Quote
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Great song, great lyrics, great everything haha.

Posted: 2011-04-20 22:22  (Last Edited: 2012-10-25 07:33) Reply | Quote
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Posted: 2011-04-20 23:20 Reply | Quote
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#16115
Heh, I like this. Those lyrics work so well too.

Posted: 2011-04-20 23:50 Reply | Quote
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Pinky: I think I follow you Brain, but how are we gonna get Norrin_Radd to sing these lyrics?

Posted: 2011-04-21 01:49  (Last Edited: 2011-04-21 01:52) Reply | Quote
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Brain: We're going to get someone better; Chuck Norris!

That was an awesome song & set of lyrics. :P

I like how this was done (i.e.: no settings in the instrument & relying solely on the tracker's effects codes). The 4xx effect was executed very well & fits the song perfectly.

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Posted: 2011-04-21 02:33  (Last Edited: 2011-04-21 02:35) Reply | Quote
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Heheh, maybe I should have been a lyricist?

boi frand
on the pc
playin a game
why don't you play with me, oh
boi frand
writin a song
come over here
baby it's been too long
oh boi
...

boi frand
let's go outside
get in the car
and we'll go for a ride, oh
boi frand
I'm goin out
when you're for real
you should give me a shout, oh

(the bridge/chorus, or whatever, is kind of awkward for singing, but here's my shot)

I just want a boi who thrills me, oh
I just want some one who will be a

(repeat)

boi frand
you're such a nerd
that stuff's for kids
baby haven't you heard, oh
boi frand
that sounds like shit
I plug my ears
when you say it's 8-bit, oh (too mean?)

(bridge/chorus)

What do you want to do for an ending?

Posted: 2011-04-21 03:32  (Last Edited: 2012-10-25 07:33) Reply | Quote
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Posted: 2011-04-21 03:42 Reply | Quote
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Not the style I usually associate with you gyms, but it's awesome anyway. Love the little pentatonic riffs. Also digging the added sections, and the VRC6 saw bass really helps the triangle fill out the low-end. This should be awesome with mac vox.

And classy lyrics MrFTBN .

Posted: 2011-04-21 04:20  (Last Edited: 2011-04-21 06:17) Reply | Quote
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Yeah, those sound more like verses now. I changed a couple frames to make it more lyric-friendly.

Hmm, more writing? Maybe I'll give it a try later. Or other people can chip in.

Edit: You know what - I think I was able to make it work, kinda. So, I changed some of it back to what you originally wrote. How's this for the first verse?

(Verse One)

Ever-y day you sleep in til no-on.
Then when you're up, you start playing with 8 bits.
you need a job. you say that real soon you'll
top the charts with your "retro music ge-ni-us"

I don't know why you can't be like me and
have some fun. just be normal. don't you wanna be?
maybe you'd play guitar in a real band.
sing me a song, we'll get a long, I just wanna have a


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Posted: 2011-04-21 07:11  (Last Edited: 2012-10-25 07:34) Reply | Quote
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