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[b]This song will be used in a factory that sell fun. Processed. Its scary, isn't it.
These are my core questions,
1. Are the Transition choppy?
2. Good rhythm? Good beat?
3. Good Instruments?
I give credit for the DPCM to Bradley, You are awesome. [/b]
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Day 1147
I've read up on all of my old forum posts, and I can not tell you all how grateful I am to have had your support and feedback in the past
Thanks everyone! Keep on composing :D
~Yuccatosis
I'm having the same problem with listening to this song as your other ones. From what I can tell, it seems that you don't know which direction that you want to take this song in, much like your other ones. I think that you need to think more broadly about your options when making tracks. You should put a little more time into thinking how you want your songs to be paced. On another note, I do see that you aren't taking any risks, which I think you need to do more of ;you need to make a bigger definition between your sound channels than you currently do. I think you could use a lot more work, and i'm only trying to be helpful.
In all seriousness, with as little as I know about music, it was okay, but two things bother me: The bassline (noise, triangle and PCM) never ever change. They get repetetive and boring far too quickly. Aside from that, the song never seems to be going anywhere. There isn't much of a melodic harmony, and next to the monotone bass, the song just cycles through different square melodies. It never builds up to anything or does anything, really. Don't have a lot to say about the transitions, though, if nothing else, you could probably tweak the instruments to be more interesting.
[quote=scrimpeh]In all seriousness, with as little as I know about music, it was okay, but two things bother me: The bassline (noise, triangle and PCM) never ever change. They get repetetive and boring far too quickly. Aside from that, the song never seems to be going anywhere. There isn't much of a melodic harmony, and next to the monotone bass, the song just cycles through different square melodies. It never builds up to anything or does anything, really. Don't have a lot to say about the transitions, though, if nothing else, you could probably tweak the instruments to be more interesting.
Well, my two cents.[/quote]
[b]The bass changes for one frame, and the DPCM changes from one to another, the drum doesn't, but this is what I hate about FTI files, Every one sees the notes, but no one would really notice if they couldn't see the notes.[/b]
You can still hear that this song isn't very good, lacks a direction and is very repetitive. It doesn't matter if you're listening to the FTM or the NSF, the outcome is the same.
[quote=danooct1]You can still hear that this song isn't very good, lacks a direction and is very repetitive. It doesn't matter if you're listening to the FTM or the NSF, the outcome is the same. [/quote]
[b]I know that, but with FTM people see the notes, I don't like NSF because I can't listen to them. I don't know how.[/b]
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Day 1147
I've read up on all of my old forum posts, and I can not tell you all how grateful I am to have had your support and feedback in the past
Thanks everyone! Keep on composing :D
~Yuccatosis
You open NSF files in an emulator like Nestopia, or you get WinAmp with a plug-in like NotSoFatso or nsfplug.
Anyways, your song does lack in variation; you seem to try & emphasize the percussion more than the other channels in your track (which is alright when done properly,) but it eventually becomes overwhelming. All you need is to practice/experiment by emphasizing your squares & triangle more, as well as finding note combinations that sound like they should go together.
[quote=8BitItalianS][quote=Trollololo]Damn, I'm fapping to this song now for the third time in a row!
Best sound waves that hit my ear, EVUR!
[b]1. Are the Transition choppy?[/b]
NOT AT ALL!
[b]2. Good rhythm? Good beat?[/b]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1W7c8QghPxk]OF COURSE!
[b]3. Good Instruments?[/b]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1W7c8QghPxk]OF COURSE![/quote]
Will you ever go away?[/quote]
Ignore him; he's a troll (he acts like a douche bag online purposely). If you really want him to go away, just ask him how's his girlfriend (he'll leave because he neither has an answer nor a girlfriend). :P
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[quote=TechEmporium]You open NSF files in an emulator like Nestopia, or you get WinAmp with a plug-in like NotSoFatso or nsfplug.
Anyways, your song does lack in variation; you seem to try & emphasize the percussion more than the other channels in your track (which is alright when done properly,) but it eventually becomes overwhelming. All you need is to practice/experiment by emphasizing your squares & triangle more, as well as finding note combinations that sound like they should go together.
[quote=8BitItalianS][quote=Trollololo]Damn, I'm fapping to this song now for the third time in a row!
Best sound waves that hit my ear, EVUR!
[b]1. Are the Transition choppy?[/b]
NOT AT ALL!
[b]2. Good rhythm? Good beat?[/b]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1W7c8QghPxk]OF COURSE!
[b]3. Good Instruments?[/b]
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1W7c8QghPxk]OF COURSE![/quote]
Will you ever go away?[/quote]
Ignore him; he's a troll (he acts like a douche bag online purposely). If you really want him to go away, just ask him how's his girlfriend (he'll leave because he neither has an answer nor a girlfriend). :P[/quote]
I know about him. I was just feeding him for the hell of it. :P
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