That first track really doesn't remind me of any cartoon from the 80's, but it's definitely an improvement from the previous stuff you were posting here. You have better harmony between notes now (though it could still be refined a bit more) & your songs are getting a bit longer (a good thing; you can expand your music more).
The only downside is that your notes turn to discord halfway through the song & your patterns are a bit repetitive.
All I can say now is that you need to only refine your harmony & practice better syncopation in your music.
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Actually, the noise channel's quite decent in my opinion, even though the bass could use some work (& that's besides working on harmony).
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Ghhh...looks like my inspiration gone away...
Where's the inspiration? Not to offend you, but going out on your own without putting much of an effort to learn some amount of theory isn't exactly something I'd call inspiration.
Inspiration would be had if you at least did a cover of someone else's work (even a lullaby); you'd at least be inspired by their technique & learn a thing or two about actual music theory (such as harmony & discord).
If an ordinary person cringes at a song, it's because there are too many odd note combinations being used in a song. This is discord. For example:
C-4 00 - --- | C#4 00 - ---
Doesn't really go well together (& I find your music has too much of this). But:
C-4 00 - --- | E-4 00 - ---
Is a pretty harmonious pair. There are other notes that can combine in this way; if you're not good with music theory or even math, you can at least hear the difference between discord & harmony.
Now, one thing to remember; a small amount of discord is OK, as long as it's in moderation compared to harmonious notes. Too much discord will get people cringing as they listen to your tune. As for syncopation, all you need is even the slightest change in a note pattern; change even one note in a harmonious way that still flows well with the rest of your music (which can open your song to a change in atmosphere).
And don't be disparaged; everyone's music has some quirk in it that others may not like (& I mean everyone's). All you need to do is keep practicing & have a will to learn the theory (even if it's through a method that you hate as much as covering music). You seriously have potential; if only you would put forth the effort.
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im going to continue making this crazy stuff then after a while my style will be so sick that you will be like damn suuun that shit is so sick i dont even get it. i will be like bro its ok.. you dont have to.
After having listened to everything you've posted I feel kinda confused. Everything you make is so... random. Of course, you've improved since page 1, but your songs still doesn't make much sense.
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