Deprecated: mysql_connect(): The mysql extension is deprecated and will be removed in the future: use mysqli or PDO instead in /storage/content/49/145849/famitracker.com/public_html/forum/classes/dbHandler.php on line 29 FamiTracker
Login:
Menu:
Post: Author:
FamiTracker > General > Show Off Your Work > Fear Knight Owner: yucca70 New post
Page 1 of 2 Sort: Goto Page: [1] [2] Next >>
Fear Knight Posted: 2011-03-10 21:46  (Last Edited: 2011-03-11 21:43) Reply | Quote
yucca70

Avatar

Member for: 4120 days
Location: United States, PA
Status: Offline

#14070
[color=red]This is my primary theme. I made this theme a couple years ago.
Its for a game im making,(dungeon theme) hope you like!
[color=cyan](I changed My signature so the first two people below were talking about it)

_______________________
Day 1147
I've read up on all of my old forum posts, and I can not tell you all how grateful I am to have had your support and feedback in the past
Thanks everyone! Keep on composing :D
~Yuccatosis
Attachments:
kngihtz_fear.ftm (8 Kb)
Posted: 2011-03-10 22:10  (Last Edited: 2011-03-10 22:10) Reply | Quote
Velathnos

Avatar

Member for: 4200 days
Location: Montreal, Canada
Status: Offline

#14071
Well I don't want you to turn into Chuck Norris, but, for constructive criticism purpose, I'd try to use one the square channel to make a nice accompaniment pattern instead of doubling the melody. I'd also try to work on the bass to give it a little more individuality (rythmically).

RE: Fear Knight Posted: 2011-03-10 22:55 Reply | Quote
InterrobangPie

Avatar

Member for: 4198 days
Location: England
Status: Offline

#14072
[quote=yucca70]I wont be offended if you call it bad.[/quote]
That's fine then. It's bad.

_______________________
[quote=iGotno_scope]im going to continue making this crazy stuff then after a while my style will be so sick that you will be like damn suuun that shit is so sick i dont even get it. i will be like bro its ok.. you dont have to.[/quote]
RE: Fear Knight Posted: 2011-03-11 00:16 Reply | Quote
yucca70

Avatar

Member for: 4120 days
Location: United States, PA
Status: Offline

#14074
[quote=InterrobangPie][quote=yucca70]I wont be offended if you call it bad.[/quote]
That's fine then. It's bad.[/quote]
[color=red]lol

_______________________
Day 1147
I've read up on all of my old forum posts, and I can not tell you all how grateful I am to have had your support and feedback in the past
Thanks everyone! Keep on composing :D
~Yuccatosis
Posted: 2011-03-11 01:53 Reply | Quote
TechEmporium

Avatar

Member for: 4485 days
Status: Offline

#14079
How long ago did you first start with FamiTracker? And is this your first tune?

I admit that it's not exactly the greatest, but I was also no Koji Kondo when I first started. The chief problem with this song is that it's lacking in a true melody with harmony. you just need to improve it by creating what a n00b would call "a second song that complements the lead."

Basically, just as you have square channel 1 as your lead, you should create a new "lead" in channel 2 that different, but complements channel 1 in a harmonious way.

_______________________
Technology: the one thing that's hated & cursed at by all engineers, technologists, scientists & technicians!

(Lousy modern technology! )
Posted: 2011-03-11 10:41 Reply | Quote
nicetas_c



Member for: 4582 days
Location: AB, CA
Status: Offline

#14088
#FF0000

rartg

Posted: 2011-03-11 15:06 Reply | Quote
InterrobangPie

Avatar

Member for: 4198 days
Location: England
Status: Offline

#14095
[quote=nicetas_c]#FF0000[/quote]
ikr

_______________________
[quote=iGotno_scope]im going to continue making this crazy stuff then after a while my style will be so sick that you will be like damn suuun that shit is so sick i dont even get it. i will be like bro its ok.. you dont have to.[/quote]
Posted: 2011-03-11 21:36 Reply | Quote
yucca70

Avatar

Member for: 4120 days
Location: United States, PA
Status: Offline

#14117
[quote=TechEmporium]How long ago did you first start with FamiTracker? And is this your first tune?

I admit that it's not exactly the greatest, but I was also no Koji Kondo when I first started. The chief problem with this song is that it's lacking in a true melody with harmony. you just need to improve it by creating what a n00b would call "a second song that complements the lead."

Basically, just as you have square channel 1 as your lead, you should create a new "lead" in channel 2 that different, but complements channel 1 in a harmonious way.[/quote]

[color=red]I started about a year ago.
BUT I never looked up tutorials though until a month ago, so Ive been trying to use a few different ways to song making until I found one that works, Thank you though for the advice.

_______________________
Day 1147
I've read up on all of my old forum posts, and I can not tell you all how grateful I am to have had your support and feedback in the past
Thanks everyone! Keep on composing :D
~Yuccatosis
Posted: 2011-03-11 21:37 Reply | Quote
yucca70

Avatar

Member for: 4120 days
Location: United States, PA
Status: Offline

#14118
[quote=nicetas_c]#FF0000

rartg[/quote]

[color=red]I only speak English.

_______________________
Day 1147
I've read up on all of my old forum posts, and I can not tell you all how grateful I am to have had your support and feedback in the past
Thanks everyone! Keep on composing :D
~Yuccatosis
Posted: 2011-03-11 21:44 Reply | Quote
InterrobangPie

Avatar

Member for: 4198 days
Location: England
Status: Offline

#14119
why the red
is there any need
no there isn't
stop it.

_______________________
[quote=iGotno_scope]im going to continue making this crazy stuff then after a while my style will be so sick that you will be like damn suuun that shit is so sick i dont even get it. i will be like bro its ok.. you dont have to.[/quote]
Posted: 2011-03-12 01:30 Reply | Quote
TechEmporium

Avatar

Member for: 4485 days
Status: Offline

#14128
Well, if anyone wants to be a real douche, they could use #222222 as a font color on this forum. :P

_______________________
Technology: the one thing that's hated & cursed at by all engineers, technologists, scientists & technicians!

(Lousy modern technology! )
Posted: 2011-03-12 02:03 Reply | Quote
yucca70

Avatar

Member for: 4120 days
Location: United States, PA
Status: Offline

#14129
[quote=InterrobangPie]why the red
is there any need
no there isn't
stop it.[/quote]
[color=orange]Ok

_______________________
Day 1147
I've read up on all of my old forum posts, and I can not tell you all how grateful I am to have had your support and feedback in the past
Thanks everyone! Keep on composing :D
~Yuccatosis
Posted: 2011-03-12 04:31 Reply | Quote
8BitItalianS

Avatar

Member for: 4121 days
Location: Nowhere Ville
Status: Offline

#14131
...Just no.

_______________________
-------
Posted: 2011-03-12 18:12 Reply | Quote
nicetas_c



Member for: 4582 days
Location: AB, CA
Status: Offline

#14148
[quote=TechEmporium]Well, if anyone wants to be a real douche, they could use #222222 as a font color on this forum. :P[/quote]
wrong

SHOULD BE #333333

[color=#333333]LIKE THIS













teh univars

Posted: 2011-03-13 20:43  (Last Edited: 2011-03-13 20:45) Reply | Quote
yucca70

Avatar

Member for: 4120 days
Location: United States, PA
Status: Offline

#14204


_______________________
Day 1147
I've read up on all of my old forum posts, and I can not tell you all how grateful I am to have had your support and feedback in the past
Thanks everyone! Keep on composing :D
~Yuccatosis
Page 1 of 2 Sort: Goto Page: [1] [2] Next >>