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You have a GMajor chord there but the C doesn't fit the 1 3 5 that makes a chord. Instead you have 1 4 5 which means you have a Suspension. a 4-3 suspension (which are the most common kind used) That non-chord C wants to resolve down to B so it'll fit in the GMaj chord.
I'd say give Square 2 some more motion, kind of like a walking bass-line almost. (Not talking about using arpeggios/0xy effect, just quarter notes, maybe.) Let it fill out notes in the harmony that aren't covered by S1/T. Avoid octaves and unisons between S1 and S2.
The problem with 0A is there. You should be reaching a C major chord but you've got C G and D (?). Xyz_39808 is suggesting you treat it as a suspended C that resolves to a B, but based on the song you're covering I think the D is a mistake. You need an E in this chord, and the D should be gone.
09 contains: D F A-flat C
0A contains: C E G
F will nicely resolve to E if you let it, A-flat to G (you've already got this). C is a common tone, and D disappears on its own.
Maybe the easiest solution is to use this in the triangle for that pattern:
