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I WANT FEEDBACK Posted: 2011-02-20 23:58 Reply | Quote
Bradley

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I think this is the best song I've ever made (which isn't really saying much).

What do you guys think? It's going to be the theme for Ceres Man in the the Mega Man 18-2 Project.
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RE: I WANT FEEDBACK Posted: 2011-02-21 00:41 Reply | Quote
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Put some variation in your drum lines. Especially around order 06, that melody could really use some rhythm to accent/interact-with. (The bass line too.) Like, the tri/noise columns are just playing a pattern, rather than complementing the square channels.

Anyhow, the piece has charm. Keep at it.
Posted: 2011-02-21 00:54  (Last Edited: 2012-10-25 07:03) Reply | Quote
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Posted: 2011-02-21 01:36 Reply | Quote
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I slightly changed the drum lines for patterns 04, 05, 08, and 09.
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Posted: 2011-02-21 03:09  (Last Edited: 2011-02-21 03:10) Reply | Quote
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How I would try to make it better:
Fix the harmony in CH 2 in patterns 01, 03
Do something else besides the R11 and Q11 part in patterns 02 and 03, it doesn't sound that great.
Add detune to CH 2 in patterns 06 and 07

Even more variations in the noise channel. And variations in the triangle channel.
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