Wily Style Piece (WIP) EDITS WELCOME Posted: 2010-10-17 03:01 (Last Edited: 2010-10-19 15:01 )
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CodeLimit
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#10598
I've got the basic melody, I just can't find a good counter-melody, or triangle. I'm pretty much stuck here. This is my first time trying anything Wily-esque, so bear with me, please. Edits are welcome, and [i]begged for.[/i] It might seem lazy of me, but I'm leaving the rest of this up to you guys. [size=7]Sorry.
EDIT: 7:53 - Revised.
EDIT: 11:26 - Added Triangle to certain frames.
EDIT: 7:17 - Added bassline to all frames except 00 and 01.
EDIT: 6:53 - Improved bassline.
EDIT: Edits will be continuing down the page.
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Posted: 2010-10-17 03:47 (Last Edited: 2010-10-17 03:47 )
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I think that the "Amen Break" will sound better with samples in the DPCM channel.
A bit long the second part and hard to remember, but otherwise, nice melody.
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Posted: 2010-10-17 04:19 (Last Edited: 2010-10-17 04:32 )
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I added a bit of a bassline to frames 02 and 03, as well as some toms (leaving space for bass) and a few more rows. I've not got the best ear in the world, but at least it's a start to adding things.
Also, I'm jealous, you can make melodies, I can't.
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Posted: 2010-10-17 05:20 (Last Edited: 2010-10-17 05:21 )
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#10601
The melody is good, very good, maybe if you divide the melody into smaller modules will be much more catchy.
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#10606
Very WIP indeed
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#10612
[quote=Delek]I think that the "Amen Break" will sound better with samples in the DPCM channel. [/quote]
[size=15]OH MAN.
I didn't even realize I was using the "Amen Break" until I Googled it!
That part was just made up on a whim. [i]Wow.[/i]
Posted: 2010-10-18 04:55 (Last Edited: 2010-10-18 04:55 )
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Then you just has recreated the "Amen Break" man!.
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Posted: 2010-10-18 05:07 (Last Edited: 2010-10-19 01:51 )
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[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qwQLk7NcpO4]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qwQLk7NcpO4
It almost reminds me of the intro to Action 52.
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#10618
I was [i]just[/i] watching that not too long ago.
Posted: 2010-10-18 06:54 (Last Edited: 2010-10-18 06:55 )
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Delek
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#10619
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4mmCMUPCNgE]PowerPuff Girls Intro
The Amen Break is everywhere. :p
Is one of the loops more used in the world.
I used the Amen Break on my song "Buenos Dias", it's not a chiptune.
You can listen Buenos Dias on the Natural/Electronic player on my website.
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#10638
Almost there! It just needs a bassline in the first two frames, and a counter-melody in the first four frames. Here are the latest changes made.
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