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FamiTracker > General > Show Off Your Work > 2A03: My first original tune. Owner: blarrer New post
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What did you think of this song?
Good
69% ( 9 )
OK
23% ( 3 )
Bad
8% ( 1 )

Total votes: 13
2A03: My first original tune. Posted: 2010-09-10 05:21 Reply | Quote
blarrer



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#9423
Well... I finally got some good motivation and decided to make a song all on my own. I think it turned out pretty good, but i want some feedback for future composing.

Enjoy or delete


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Posted: 2010-09-10 05:49  (Last Edited: 2010-09-10 05:51) Reply | Quote
Mex

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Location: Victoria, British Columbia
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#9424
Very impressive for a first original piece!

Good Points:

* Progression moves very smoothly
* Volumes are nice
* Arps sounds very nice, awesome to see they're manual
* Noise channel sounds decent, which is a big rarity with beginners
* Song stays constant, and doesn't seem random at all

Bad Points:

* Echoing could use work, PXX will help
* A little more melodic variety would be nice
* The pattern used on Square 1 pattern 07 doesn't work very well, F#2 replaced with G-2 might sound a lot better
* Some more creative instrumentation would be nice as well

Sounds fantastic for a starting piece, can't wait to see you do more stuff!
Posted: 2010-09-10 05:56 Reply | Quote
CodeLimit

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#9426
Very nice! Probably better that a lot of stuff [i]I [/i]could do. :D
Posted: 2010-09-10 15:02 Reply | Quote
AlbeyAmakiir

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#9431
Awesome. Very enjoyable.
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