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Need some suggestions Posted: 2011-04-20 02:00  (Last Edited: 2012-10-25 01:37) Reply | Quote
Shywolf



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So I've been working on this song for a couple of days now and it has been going really well, but at the end of the third day or so I ran out of motivation and eventually found that I couldn't think of a good ending (or loop-point, or way to continue it, or...)

So I carefully tried and created three different loop-points and the revision of the song attached contains what I think is the best one (last four frames), but for some reason I feel like it just doesn't fit or match properly with the rest of the song, particularly the longish sequence just before it Does anyone else feel this way or is it just me? Are there any other changes I could make to get the song as a whole or the end to sound better, otherwise?

Any related/misc suggestions, criticism etc are welcome.

Posted: 2011-04-20 02:14 Reply | Quote
kinkinkijkin

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I cannot give any suggestions.

I say "good enough for now, which is very, very good"

Posted: 2011-04-20 03:43  (Last Edited: 2012-10-25 07:34) Reply | Quote
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Posted: 2011-04-20 20:24 Reply | Quote
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#16104
If the rest of the channels are done any louder the DPCM won't cut through like it does now.

Posted: 2011-04-20 21:01 Reply | Quote
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Uh, AXX effect is a bit redundant on S01 commands.

Sounds pretty nice though.

Posted: 2011-04-20 21:41  (Last Edited: 2011-04-20 21:42) Reply | Quote
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#16110
Very nice song, I think it is excellent.

Posted: 2011-04-20 23:12 Reply | Quote
Shywolf



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Thanks all of you for the kind comments. I think I'll just stick with this ending (though with a few changes to some of the notes and effects.)

gyms wrote:
Maybe makes things a bit louder if you want to convince me that it really is a scary boss.


It was originally going to be an intense boss theme (hence the filename), and the first six frames or so are the results of that attempt, but it quickly morphed into something else after that (hence the title of the song in the file) So I consider it more of an "adventuring" or "final stage" theme now of sorts.

Mex wrote:
Uh, AXX effect is a bit redundant on S01 commands.


Yeah... :/ Thanks for pointing that out. I miss these things way too easily...


Anyway, thanks again! I'm glad you all thought it was good.

Posted: 2011-04-21 00:04 Reply | Quote
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I love your use of the VRC7!

Posted: 2011-04-21 11:52 Reply | Quote
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Ooh that's cool.

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